Ocean Heart

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Wednesday, 20-Dec-2006 20:34:42

Evening, the light has vanished
Flakes of ice spin through a starry dream
The wind has settled, the sky reflects the eyes of the moon
The brilliance of the misty sea is the cascade of the rippling tide
Upon the face of the earth, sunbeams dance
The murmured chant of nature’s song is but a slow rhythm
The echoes twisting into a golden band of blended melodies
It drifts on the sweet air
Caressing the inner-most depths of one’s being
The wind blowing my hair back
My lips parted in a soft smile
Thinking of elves
As the tide becomes one with my beating heart.

Post 2 by Daenerys Targaryen (Enjoying Life) on Wednesday, 20-Dec-2006 21:39:58

I like this one too. Its really good.

Post 3 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Thursday, 21-Dec-2006 11:56:24

So tender a writing that brings a calmness ~
Nature at it's finest and then too the going beyond
...into another realm where ..elves reside...

Post 4 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Thursday, 21-Dec-2006 16:03:48

it was beautiful; the wording deep and calm. I like this theme; nature, the ocean. The elves were a little off, but all in all, it is a great poem, and I think I'll look for previous works of yours, if you have any up.

Post 5 by Phoenix (I'll do my homework...later.) on Wednesday, 03-Jan-2007 17:36:50

I like this one, like I liked the other one too. :) nice jog.

Post 6 by dream lady (move over school!) on Saturday, 17-Feb-2007 4:25:32

Beautiful. Painting with words instead of a paint brush. What a privilidge we artists have. Once again beautiful.